Mirmana's Sons (Just_Hamzeh)



It was hard for me to lose everyone I had ever loved. Now, with no adults left to protect us, I must carry the responsibility of all humanity, restoring lives and protecting our planet from these strangers. We must first survive, then return to avenge and gain our freedom.

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- Chapter 1: childhood
- Chapter 2: My Nights

The plot seems good, but as a suggestion, I would use something like Grammarly to check for spelling mistakes, etc. It takes a reader out of the story when there are too many errors.