The Cellar: (adhamster)

The story revolves around a family dealing with the loss of their mother, who passed away two years ago. The family’s life is characterized by constant storms and a strained relationship with their father, who blames himself for her death. When Angel gets in trouble, he gets forced into a cellar, watching as the water level gets higher and higher.

Play on Mobile:

A good piece of writing, although I’m unsure where the story is going. Tell the reader what they’ll be reading, or give them more questions on what’s to come to make them want to read more.