Your father is a famous homicide detective and, though you’ve joined the force, you’ve refused to follow in his footsteps. But when a killer starts sendings you Intricate horoscopes and detailed riddles… soon you’re working dozens of murders across the city. Can you get to the bottom of the killer’s deadly game before even more lives are lost?
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Very good so far
I really enjoyed the twist ending.
make it more obvious, anyone could tell it was emily you should’ve added more characters to remove focus off of her but their were less characters to work with so she was the only suspect since the start.
not insulting you this is just constructive criticism