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- Chapter 24: Pact
I’m loving your story so much! I can’t wait to read more! 
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Ohh my goodness! Thank you so much for reading and I’m delighted you’re enjoying it. The next chapter is dropping today 
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Chapter 14 is out now
Can Rubbie go away already? I want to put her back in the rubbish bin where she belongs?!
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Hahahaha! She’s certainly doing her best to mess things up for them… can you see a way forward for them or do you think this is it?
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From what I can see…I think they can make it forward because what goes up comes down…lets see if Tamar is ready to take Finbar Irishman back 
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Before it’s too late… 
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OMG, not the custody battle!!
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Without giving big spoilers, I can confirm there is no custody battle!!
Chapter 20 is now released
Go bite someone else Rubbie
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The real-life person that Rubie’s character is based on used to constantly tell such awful lies it was very hard to know what to believe. So, while the scenes with Sugar are entirely fictitious, they’re also completely plausible!
I’m loving your story more and more, girlie! With some perspective, I can see Fin’s struggle - as well as Tamar’s. I’m rooting for them to get through this! <3 <3
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Amazing! Thank you so much 
Yeah, at the beginning Fin just seems like a completely heartless bastard but as the story goes on you start to learn everything that led to that one stupid decision. I think of all the characters Rubie is the most complex because you just start to understand her and feel a bit sorry for her, then she goes and does something else that’s evil and becomes the bad guy again 
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Such a great story and excellent writing!! I would LOVE to read a branched version of it! Or any branched story by you. Are you planing on publishing a branched one at some point?
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Thank you, that’s so kind!
Yes, I have 2 murder mysteries in my head which I’m planning to branch with choices and points (as soon as I learn properly how to do that 
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I’m also writing a WW2 drama based on real events that happened to some of my family, and I’d like to complete Rough Justice (my Episode story). Once Damage is finished, I’ll properly commit to learning Tales Code and taking full advantage of everything this epic platform has to offer
Woohoo!!! 
that’s amazing!!! Man, I’m so looking forward to it, you don’t even know!!!
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That lying, manipulative Rubbie!! ugh
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Also I don’t hate Fin, just feel bad that he had to encounter rubbish
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